Editing Talk:Liberty Square Blueprint

Friends,

I have just finished a minor edit of the blueprint. I thought the site tracks the changes, but if not the only change I made beyond spelling corrections was the line:

Our goals are aimed at dissolving the effective "shadow government" created by the corporations and banks, that literally surrounds Liberty Plaza and is destroying the American dream, and our planet Earth. 

I know the term "shadow government" is controversial and there are some who favor its removal. I strongly advise we put this to the GA. I also think a question about the belief in the concept and the appropriateness of the term should be included in the survey I am planning.

In the limited and flawed survey I already did 88% of the respondents said one of their goals in being at OWS was to decrease the infulence of money on the US political system. I think we may find that with creative wording we may find that the shadow government idea resonates with many.

If OWS is America's Arab spring, the shadow government is the target. 

The corporate media has been clamoring for our goals. Think about how unhappy they will be if we force them to start talk seriously about the idea of a shadow government. 

Jim

==Re:Shadow govt==

"Shadow government" is good in the way it implies that our government is actually just a diffuse projection emanating from the bright, bright lights of corporate capitalism. I just think that it could be more specific spelling this out. At the same time, I think we stand to gain from keeping metaphors succinct and unambiguous. "Shadow government" might be reaching a little too high.

I also wanted to point out that occupy boston is working on a road map of their own:

[http://wiki.occupyboston.org/wiki/Road_Map]

Some people in the talk page were asking question about consistency with the language of OWS. I think this just highlights how we should be presenting this blueprint in some form sooner than later.

As Goethe's motto goes, "ohne Rast aber ohne Hast"

Without rest but without haste.  

Will be contributing my edits to both of these soon. Back in New York next week. Do we have a regular meeting time? Ted, any word from the GA?

[[User:Forezt|forest]] 11:24, 30 October 2011 (CDT)