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==Revolution== What sweet dreams of grandeur come to those who stay unsleeping. The night folds - the morning light sings of revolution. The time has come. Aristotle's time had come. In a moment he had risen. Now he was the leader of a new revolution. He had a plan. With a single spark of pulse, he would ignite a fire - a fire to consume the diseased flesh of the infected, to light the way into a new era - the transhuman age. He had a plan. With the fortune from Halcyon, he would launch a network of satellites beaming unfettered freedom of information to nodes in every organ of the evolved, singular being of humanity. It was elegant. He did not have to raise an army, he only had to connect the people - to give them a reason to rise. That would be enough. He would oversee the design and installation of the system components in two separate phases. It was a gargantuan task, to be met with the fiercest sort of resistance. A time would surely come when violence had the final say - but he was ready to fight. He would connect the people, and after that he did not know, but he was certain that it would be enough. It had been enough for Lucy, hadn't it? Just showing up, not knowing what was next. It would take money, and bodies, and science and time. But he had those things, or he knew where he could get them, and he was ready to use it all. The cancerous cells of the organism would fight with all of their impulse to maintain the paralytic grip of the malady. But their impulse would be small compared to the organism awakened, unbounded, united, in motion as one. Aristotle had a plan, and the time had come to set the plan into unstoppable, perpetual motion. He and Lucy boxed the books, and sent them on ahead. They said goodbye to the apartment where they had once again found love, and they flew from Paris. Lucy thought that the house was a thing of utmost beauty. Looking at the hearth, and the sturdy wooden frame, she finally understood how Ari's hands had gotten so rough. She loved the house as if it were a part of Aristotle. But it would be a place for work, a place full of frenetic, kinetic myth. Lucy shared the vision of a day when all of this would be over, and serenity would flood back to the land. Now it was filled with a nervous buzz, as Aristotle called on the people he trusted most, and they gathered not knowing what to expect. There were only five then, whose names by now you surely know. Aristotle the cynosure and Lucy, his beloved. There was Thomas who had shown him how to work the land, who owned the land, and Curtis, who knew the bitter price of resistance. Then there was Iggy, who had also seen the disease in the early days, and provided insight into the malady. Five, they sat, around a long wooden table in a farmhouse. There was a certain shock in seeing Ari like that, his hair shorn away, and his body adorned in the flowing black robes. There was a shock, and then no shock at all. He looked the part. He was powerful, sleek, and elusive - the softness of his words gave them their strength. He did not struggle to command the room. It seemed to the four others that he could have commanded the attention of many millions with but a whisper. He opened with a warning. They were about to embark upon a sojourn from which there was no return. He would understand if they chose to leave now, but if they stayed tonight, they stayed until victory of death. They would work in secrecy for as long as they could, but a day would come when their faces would be flashed to the world - enemies of the peace, traitor to the order of things. When that day came, they would be hunted and hounded, chased and surveilled. They would be targets. It was doubtful that they would all survive. Aristotle a sked if he wa s wel l understood. One by one they a ssented, committing their lives to the cause. With that, Aristotle laid plain the plan - satellites, nodes, and a fierce battle over the impulse of humanity. Their job was not to fight - it was to awaken a more self aware consciousness for the organism of us all. Then, if they succeeded, they would watch the fury unfold as the healthy body went about ridding itself of disease. Satellites and nodes - that was all. It would be no small feat, but then, neither is the fusion of an atom. Aristotle, who had stood as he explained the plan, fell silent and joined the others, who were seated. He asked them what they thought, wondered what they would do to bring all this about. Perhaps they had expected him to tell them each their duties, but that was not his way. He had learned from his time at the head of Halcyon that people do their best work when the take the work upon themselves. For a long moment there was silence. Nobody know what to say. Aristotle had asked a question, and he waited patiently for an answer. Lucy raised her voice. She would distribute the pathology across continents. She would spread the ungerminated seed of ideology. If people were going to rise up, then they needed a reason. She would give them a reason one crate at a time, one crate of little black books at a time. She would give them away. She would paste them inside telephone booths, and put them in the stead of hotel room bibles. Lucy would spread the word. Curtis spoke next. He would stay with Aristotle. Anyone who wanted to speak to Ari would have to speak first to him. He could keep the leader safe, and a safe leader meant a safer team. He would keep the numbers and addresses and names in his head, so that Ari could focus on the design. No paper trail, no evidence, no compromised agenda. Curtis would protect them. Thomas said he would find them friends. Five people were not enough. They would need hundreds and then thousands of friends - ultimately they would need a billion. You have to start somewhere, though, and in his short lifetime, he had met many people who he was sure would come to their aid. He would talk to students and farmers and recluses in the their caves. He what an idealist looked like - the gleam and glitter of their eye. He would find them, and he would bring them there, to his farm. Thomas would make them grow. Iggy would continue to investigate the disease, and track the progress of their treatment. He would have conversations with Aristotle regarding strategy and policy and logistics. He would argue. He would manage the operations, and he would keep a watchful eye. Iggy would guide them. Aristotle would design, specify, tool, machine and distribute the components of the remedy, the network, the evolution of revolution. Aristotle would lead a team of his systems engineers to design the satellites and then the nodes. He would take his fortune and drive the satellites into orbit, and pump out millions of network nodes with a simple, inexpensive design. Aristotle would talk to the machines. Aristotle would lead them. Of course, everybody had to do everything. With the exception of Aristotle, the responsibilities of disseminating the pathology, ensuring each others' safety, finding likeminded folk, and contributing their input fell to ever ybody. And then ever ything was Aristotle's responsibility, more than it was anyone else's, it was Aristotle's. The two houses would be the headquarters, the failsafe, the laboratory. They would be a printing press and a staging ground, a hive and a colony. They had gathered there to start a revolution, but it was unlike any that had come before it. It was a leap in complexity, a new way of being. The sense that they were on the cusp of a great transformation consumed them, and sat unspoken in the minds of a great many. At first it was only Aristotle who seemed more figure than man, but soon it was all of them. They spoke for hours about strategies and logistics and budgets and agendas. When they were finished, they found that they had each become something more than themselves. They were the five. No one had the urge to celebrate that night. There was too much to be done. Yet there was an air of pristine joy there - that they had come this far, that they were in motion. In the morning they set out, each on the lonely path of the revolutionary way. They did not know when they would see each other again, or if they would ever again gather as a group. That was part of it, though, and they took it as it came. In the months that followed, a slow trickle of bodies and buildings began to fill the farm. Thomas was in Northern California, Lucy was in New York, and Iggy was in Atlanta. They were meeting people, and talking quietly, and slipping little black books into upturned palms. It seemed to them that the world was waiting for this to happen. All they had to do was whisper the word, and ears turned upwards, awaiting, willing. It was clear from the beginning that they had struck a chord. The pathology of the malady rang true to so many who had looked on for long with the deepest dismay. It started with friends. For months, in fact, the only real addition were folks that they had known from before. Thomas had the most success. He belonged to a robust network of leftists, and they knew quite well that he was a serious man. When he told them something was brewing, they listened, and when he said that it was something serious, a few were ready to join the fight. So to the farm they came, and they sat with Aristotle. Mostly they discussed the pathology, but occasionally Aristotle would take one into his confidence, and divulge the details of the plan. They came and they went, and when they had gone it was to spread the word. Lucy made great strides. Her intelligence and her beauty unlocked doors. Soon the pathology was being read by artists and intellectuals, editors and publishers and thinkers and activists. It started to appear in bookshops and coffeehouses. The halls of the colleges and the universities and the high schools were sure to contain a few black books. Soon it was being printed in basements and back rooms, being read and released, and read and released - annotated and given to the next of the infected. To some it was a death rattle, and to some it was a call to arms. It was only what it had to be. People began to mutter the name - 'Aristotle.' Who is he? Who was he? Was he a scientist or a philosopher? Few knew for sure, except for the few that had travelled down that long dirt road to the place where two cabins stood atop the dusty dirt. The balance was shifting, and now the agents of the new revolution didn't have to convince people, but only had to say that they knew the author of that little black book. In the places where you might recruit a revolutionary 'Aristotle' was a common sound. Now they had to be more than cautious with who they chose to send to the farm. Aristotle had confidence in their judgement, and he was not disappointed. Of course, it helped that Curtis controlled the comings and goings. Potential agents were told to go to Joshua Tree and wait. Curtis picked them up and searched their bodies, blindfolded them and sized them up. More than once he refused entry to people who looked at him wrong, or hadn't read the book right, or had brought a guest. Then it started to snowball, as revolutions tend to do. A year after they had first gathered, more than two-hundred and fifty people had come and gone from the farm. Aristotle spent the majority of his time tinkering and drawing schematics, but we'll get to that in a bit. Lucy would visit for weeks at a time, to print more books and to be with Aristotle. They wished that they never had to part, but when the run was done, and the pages were bound, again she would go off. Their love flourished and endured. Lucy planted quite fertile seeds in europe. Thomas went to Latin America. The message spanned idioms, was fresh and vibrant even in translation. The movement was becoming global. From China and India and Russia they came, from Algeria and Israel and Somalia and Peru. Each time, they came and went, and the going had a clear purpose and a new pulse. It grew and it grew, and eventually average people started to take note. What was that book, and who had penned it? The made for good TV, and demand for the text began to take off. It was being printed on presses in Africa and Asia, and America, too. They printed it in Europe and in Australia. Everywhere they were printing it. They could not be printed with enough haste. It spread on the internet, too. The movement had reached a critical mass, and then in earnest the backlash began. The Senators and businesspeople did not know where the explosive little treatise had come from, but they tore it to dust just the same. They dared the author to come forth, but Aristotle knew that it was not yet time. He let imitators play at being him, because all of them were exposed in time. He was patient, and he knew that it was good let the chaos build. Certainly the chaos grew, until there was a palpable nervousness in the halls of power. The atmosphere was becoming combustible, and they feared a spark of pulse would set ablaze their mechanism of oppression and violence. Their fear was not unfounded. But it was good to let the chaos build. That's what Iggy said, and Aristotle trusted Ignatius. While Ari worked with his engineers, Iggy took care of running everything else. He slowly drew the Halcyon billions into secure positions. From time to time he thought that the money should have gone to feed people, or to give them shelter, but then he realized that it ultimately was. The movement was strong, and it seemed that Aristotle could have started a violent uprising at his command. But that would not work - their numbers would be crushed and their revolution would be eliminated. They had to wait, and someday it would be not a few thousand that were willing to work for the cause, but a few billion. Someday soon, their moment would come. It is not an easy thing, to wait and grow, when every impulse says to fling yourself foreword into the future. It is not an easy thing at all, but great strength and undiminished resolve, they waited and they grew. They became strong. The worked in shadows, in the dark and the dust. They cast ripples, out and out into the sea of our consciousness. They were fearless, and Aristotle's brilliance gave them strength. He was soft and strong as a leader. He knew when to speak and when to listen - mostly he listened. He knew the day would come to speak. He listened most of all to the team of expert technicians who aided him in the essential work. The first day after the meeting of the original five, Aristotle had set to work designing the satellites that would that would sing the song of an impulse jump. He called on the four of his employees that had been receptive to the idea of the malady before such a thing was known to exist. They came, and they did not leave. It wasn't the physical design of the satellites which posed the greatest challenge. Orbital mechanics, telemetry and data relay were actually relatively basic compared to the essential question. Aristotle wondered how he might design a network with so few satellites and so many nodes. The imbalance in numbers created an incredible need to handle each node with a light touch. Aristotle had designed large networks before, but never anything as large as this. There had never been anything as large as this. To most, the idea seemed impossible, but to Aristotle it was certainly possible. He only had to find a way. While the others travelled the globe, created an ever growing din of discontent among the masses, Aristotle only wracked his brain. He ran simulation after simulation, computing bandwidths and throughputs and bit rates and speed. At first they failed miserably. They were orders of magnitude below the efficiencies they would need. But one radical innovation followed another, and soon they were envisioning an architecture that was radically new. It was more elegant and less expensive than anything that had come before. The numbers improved. Aristotle did not become frustrated, when after a year of nonstop work, they were less than halfway there. He not become frustrated at all, only returned to his work, and wondered what he could ask the others to give. His engineers were as indispensable limbs, executing ideas flawlessly, allowing Ari to focus on the task of coming up with solutions. Everyday he thought of something, a way to reduce the satellite's load. At night he dreamed only of the machines, pulsating, vibrating, alive and awake. He felt that he did more work while sleeping than when awake. Often he sprang from bed with a new idea for the others to implement. Aristotle did not become frustrated, he only became urgently brilliant. None of his team had seen a mind like that. Ari was satisfied with the specifications, and the construction began in May. Under the cover of the Halcyon name they purchased the parts and materials. After that, the fabrication was under Iggy's direction. It would take roughly twelves months to prepare them for launch. Aristotle hoped that it would be enough time to finish the code. It had been almost a year and half since they had set in motion. Aristotle was pleased with how far they had come. They were a movement now - global and growing in the light of new ideas. They were well on their way, and Aristotle was pleased that there was so much work to do. Many times they had broken through the barrier of diminishing returns, but always it came back. The work went on like that - in fits and starts, followed by days of slow decay. When Aristotle figured that they were ninety percent of the way there, he made a decision that shocked the team. He wanted to begin again, from scratch, build the whole skyscraper of code from the ground up. He said they would build it better this time, and faster, with all the insight and knowledge they had gained. Starting out again from the top was daunting, but it proved to be exactly what they had to do. Rebuilding each module of the code, they found that the second version was consistently quicker, shorter, more efficient, and altogether a more elegant expression of the idea. The fundamental technique was to use the abundance of users as source of robustness, sharing with each other outside of the uplink. They had designed a network which got quicker with every added node. It had taken them eighteen months to design the architecture of the network that would come to be called 'MIND.' They were ready for launch. All that remained was to prepare the satellites for their wild ride. It was the finest system that Aristotle had ever designed, and though he was sanguine, there was a measure of sadness in him when it was done. The plan would move ahead with a midsummer launch, and Ari knew that he would finally have to show himself. You can't just launch a satellite into space and not tell anybody about it. It was fortunate that he had remained anonymous as long as he had, but now that would end. The day arrived. The summer heat was at the height of its simmer. The occasion was momentous, and much of the movement was invited to gather in the salt flats of Utah. They would watch the payload of their resistance take flight. The original five were there, and thousands of those that had come to meet Aristotle on the farm. A spotless, sparkling sky of grey-white haze hung over them as they counted down the minutes to ignition. It was the first time they had gathered in number. One could not help but feel the power of the pulse, out there in the desert. There were too many of them, and they were too smart, and too willing to give everything. Ten minutes to launch - Aristotle went amongst the crowd. He was not hot in his black kurta. It flowed and breathed and seemed to generate the wind. He was beautiful that day, and Lucy held his hand. Five minutes - Aristotle beamed and shook the hands of many. He remembered almost all of their names. Three minutes - vapor started slowly to flow from beneath the bodies of the rockets. Two - Aristotle kissed Lucy on the forehead. She kissed him on the chin. One - the nervous energy had a scent. It was the smell of electricity. It was the smell of an actualized dream. Launch. The heat scorched the air as the rockets took to flight, and a tremendous roar shook the endless earth. They cheered and whooped as they rose, ever higher, essentially ascendant. Borne atop balls of flame, the satellites took to that space beyond the sky. Aristotle wept, and the sight of his joyous weeping caused others to weep as well. He wept for the beauty of it all. He wept and leapt and whooped for the remedy. It was up there now, carrying the code that would connect the earth. The light of the sun seemed to bounce and pulse. Aristotle knew what it felt like to live inside a dream. Aristotle felt the sickness weakening inside him. The impulse of the MIND was strong. Others felt it, too. When the trail of vapor had gone from the sky, Aristotle stood to speak. It was time to claim the pathology of the malady, and to show the world the person that he had developed a remedy. Lucy, Curtis, Thomas and Iggy stood behind him, and the cameras could see the crowd of rebels expanding into the desert beyond. It was time to come into the open. Aristotle raised his voice. First he explained the purpose of the satellites, which were finding their orbits that very moment. They would provide a signal to facilitate the interconnection and free communication of all humans. Soon, he said, his organization would begin to distribute nodes free of charge. Existing computers could log on as long as they had some kind of radio. For too long the people of the planet had been bound by ignorance, and forced by isolation to obey the destructive impulse of the diseased. Now it was time to unify, to show that they would begin to embrace the higher consciousness of a planetary MIND. This message went out and out across the globe, dubbed and subtitles and translated so that all could hear. The reaction was immediate, and Aristotle knew that he had struck fear into the hearts of those who rejected the idea of a common humanity and a common good. They took to the airwaves armed only with falsehood. The couldn't condemn the MIND project - it was too popular, and anyways beyond control. They made empty pledges of support for the idea, while at once setting about the task of tearing down those that had brought it to bloom. They called it a desperate power grab by a group of armed extremists. The called for the immediate handover of control, or for the arrest of Aristotle and his movement. Still, when the malady struck at him, Aristotle struck back. He that it was not his power that he fought for, but the abdication of theirs. He sounded a warning that the people would no longer tolerate their misfeasance, nonfeasance and malfeasance. The people would not suffer their disdain for the life of the planet - tolerate their destructive impulse. He said that the time had come for them to cede control to the people. People heard Aristotle's words, and a great many agreed. If they had not read his book already, surely they did after the birth of MIND. This was no time to sit back and watch. It seemed certain now that the soul of the planet was at stake. The clatter was constant. People spoke openly about the growing discord of a fractured civilization. From the time that MIND first blinked on, it was clear that there had been a shift. The members of the moment fanned out, and waged a battle for minds and bodies and souls. They risked arrest, detention, and torture at the hands of any government. They went with joy. Aristotle became as famous as those against whom he struggled. It didn't take long for them to link Halcyon to the revolution, but they were too late. Iggy had taken practically every cent of Halcyon and purchased quantities of certain elements - gold and silicone and tungsten and others. The funds were secure. The Halcyon link served to reassure people that the network was trustworthy. Aristotle published open specifications to help people connect their machines to the network. Slowly it began to grow. But MIND wasn't just for people who already had machines. It was for those who had nothing, for those who had no access to information at all. It was to them that he needed to deliver, and he knew he had not yet achieved that goal. He would carry on the fight until anyone in the world could free share their ideas - then the fight would in earnest begin. When the violent reaction of the malady to the remedy increased its pitch, Aristotle only referenced the small black book that he carried all the time. He said that resistance to MIND was only the disease fighting back against its cure. He only said that they would prevail. He only said, only softly, that soon the nature of humanity would come to bear. Either people would united under the flag of universal equality and mutual freedom, or the planet would perish. It would be choked to death by those that had raped it - leaving the thrashing masses to fend for themselves in a cold void. Aristotle had to return to work, but he knew he could not return to the farm. It was essential that he complete the second phase of the plan before the authorities had time to convince the people that Aristotle was not worthy of their trust. Iggy and Ari and Curtus found a property in Idaho to use as a research facility. The task was to design a network node that could be produced as cheaply as possible. He had to make the machine that would carry his message to the masses. He figured they would need to produce one billion machines. That would be more than one for every ten people, even if you account for the mil lions of units that would be lost in the str ug gle over distribution. One billion machines for one billion dollars. No matter how you sliced it, it was going to be a squeeze. Aristotle had the same certainty that he had brought to the satellite job. He knew he could not fail. The basic premise of the design was to create a computer that could send, receive, and display information. It didn't have to be powerful, but it did have to be strong. It would have to withstand the heat of the desert, the cold of the tundra, the dry mountain air and the damp grove. Above all else, Aristotle valued elegance in design, and he wanted to make sure that whatever the produced could be reproduced by others from the schematics. That way the responsibility of production would not fall solely on him. For months he and his team were cooped up in their mountain hole - the battle for allegiance raged outside. The device had to be able to gather energy from the bountiful fusion of the sun. It had to be small and light and portable. It needed to be intuitive. Aristotle had been designing computers since his second year of college, but this was something else. This was art. In the patterns and the circuits, Aristotle felt himself growing closer to a solution. It wasn't entirely empirical - at times his hand moved on the page in ways that his mind did not understand. It was a trance-like state that overtook him as he produced design after design, a zen state, similar to way he felt when he made love. They pumped out prototype after prototype, page after page, one foot in front of the other, until Aristotle thought the design was good. It was a piece of flexible, electrosensitive plastic with circuits printed on to the back. On the front there was a photovoltaic cell, an array of light emitting diodes, and a space for input. The design was done. The next morning, Aristotle was awakened by a commotion in the yard. It was too early. Then there was a rapping at the door. He had taken to sleeping in the lab. Before he had risen from his cot, the door flew open, and he saw the badge. Finally, they had come. The timing was suspect - perhaps they had been watching the entire time, waiting for the right moment to barge in. Perhaps they had only found him just now. "We have a warrant for your arrest and for the confiscation of everything in this laboratory." Aristotle had no idea how many agents had come, but he was sure that there was no other choice. If they took the prototype the would destroy it, and he might never get the chance to recreate it. He had to fight. Curtis was screaming in the hallway. The battle was about to begin. Aristotle took the pistol from beneath his bed, and shot with a steady flick at the agent in the doorway. He fell. Seconds later the percussive clack of gunfire could be heard across the grounds. Curtis dispatched three agents quickly, and rushed into the room where Aristotle was gathering his things. They knew that other agents of the malady would not be far behind. The had time only to gather the research and flee. Six revolutionaries were killed in the shootout, and all twelve agents who arrived had been slain. The agents had foolishly not expected such resistance. It was their way to believe that anyone would fold at the sight of a loaded gun. They were wrong. The revolution had been prepared, had always been prepared. Ari knew that the luxury of being underestimated would not come again. He was only thankful that they had gotten away with their prototype and their lives. They went to the north, and travelled with all haste. Under Curtis' guidance, they made their way to safety. They warned their allies that the crackdown was about to begin. Up they went, north, to Alaska. The traversed the vast wilderness of the northwest. Always they looked behind them, as Aristotle had done in the chaos of the deep woods. They wondered when death would appear, but it was only shadow and fear that tracked them, only the phantoms inside the mind. There was fluxion in humanity's impulse - the work of the revolution had to go on. In the harshness of the Alaskan tundra, they set about producing copies of the machines for which they'd killed. In mere months units were rolling down the line - thousands every day. But that wouldn't be nearly enough. Aristotle sent specifications and resources to agents stationed in ever y organ of humanity. The movement was millions strong now, counting only those who were willing to pay the ultimate price. The machine of Aristotle's grand design was called 'node.' It was soon being produced at an astounding rate. Every day, a million new machines poured out of basements in bangladesh and dorm rooms and mud huts and even a few mansions. The only order was to get them to the people that could use them most. Every day, Aristotle waited the number of nodes grow. MIND became faster, as it had been designed to do - it became faster and more robust. Aristotle could feel the whole planet pulse. Every time a new node was brought to life, it routed the user to the text of the pathology. It was in a thousand languages now, translated into any intelligible idiom. People knew who had given them the greatest of gifts - it was Aristotle and his army. In return, Aristotle asked only that people share, communicate, learn, unite. Authorities the world over said that anyone who had a node was part of some monstrous plot. It was too late for that - there were too many nodes. Even the people who were supposed to carry out the malady's violent resistance to the remedy were connecting to MIND. They were reading about the purpose of the machines for themselves. The bureaucrats and demagogues had lost control of their well-trained dogs, and we're losing more control every day. It would not be long until the edifice came crashing down a round them, becoming nothing more than a smoldering pile of hateful rubble. Every day a million new nodes were born, and the rate was only increasing. It was on every tongue - the times were changing, the impulse jump was near. Soon they would rid themselves of the malady. World leaders met in scared little summits, and asked themselves what they could possibly do - to stop the onslaught, to staunch the bleeding. Even if they found Aristotle again, what then? It was more than one man - so much more. Their violent rhetoric grew, becoming increasingly savage. To those that remained convinced of their authority, they urged calm. They said that the situation was under control, but the panic behind their eyes and underneath their voices was plain. They were powerless in the face of a force so much greater than guns. Never before had they imagined such a thing - a rebellion which could not be put down with brute force. The had not realized that the unity of the people thye oppressed would be their downfall. Aristotle had been on the lam for more than a year. He and the others had hidden themselves away along the northern frontier. Their work was done for a moment. They had established an apparatus that could run in their absence, continue to pump out those nodes. To a few they were fugitives, but to many the were the future. It had been their impossible dream that was changing the world. The were simply the five. More than human, to most they were myth. After one year of production, MIND had a billion nodes. The number would only continue to grow. The world was ready for the final thrust, to buck their oppressors in a tumultuous day of upheaval. They could bear the malady no more. It was time. Aristotle had only to say the word. So now you've seen the revolution. I wonder if it was what you expected. People tend to think of revolutions as violent affairs, but not this one. I mean, sure, there was some violence in there. Aristotle wasn't willing to just go down like that. But they eschewed violence when they could, and it certainly wasn't part of their plan. It was only unity, only bringing people together, so that they could see how strong they really were. Sometimes that's all it takes. Not that it was easy, because it certainly was not that - only that it was elegant, simple, something anyone could understand. Elegance is so often the key to solving a complex problem - that's what I think, at least. Now, I apologize if that was a little too much of a hurried description of events, and less about the characters. There was just a lot to describe. Perhaps I shouldn't have tried to fit five very active years into a single chapter, but the last thing I want is for this book to drag on. Really - if you feel that this is all played out, you can stop now. I only ask, as usual, that you let me know. I mean, I can tell you how this is going to go. The good guys are going to win. In most ways that already have. All that remains now is for the people to rise up. Our friends can sort of just sit back and watch - sort of. I'm going to write the rising tonight. It's early yet, and I just sort of feel that it's time. I'm going to save the last chapter, though. Maybe for tomorrow. You know, it doesn't take very long to write a book if you're not doing much of anything else. It's been two weeks to the day since I started out. Perhaps it's supposed to take longer - I don't know. Perhaps it shows. It's just that once it starts coming, it really doesn't stop. The story writes itself - your only job is to put it into words. Who knew? Marcus and I are going to take a break soon, to eat a mango. It is good to eat mangoes while you write, but you have to be careful not to drip the juice on the page. That would be no good at all. Speaking of things that are no good at all, my pencil ran out of lead in the middle of this chapter. You remember - the P205 that I told you about. I'm using a Sharplet 2 now, but it's not the same. I think that pencil has become one of my favorite objects. Not to worry, though - I'll fill it back up with graphite when I return to the states. We'll be together for a long time, if I can keep from losing it. That would be nice. Okay, it's mango time, and I've got to do all the cutting. I know that it's hard to part, but I'll be back soon. Just you wait - or don't - doesn't matter to me. You go on ahead, and I swear I'll catch up, or you can just chill. Seriously, though, it's mango time.
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